Looking for 2 victi......Volunteers!

This is just a pretty starfish

I've seen by the poll that I posted that you lovelies want more critiques.  I took a couple of weeks off from offering critiques and now it's time to start again.  Y'all amaze me with your insights and your helpful suggestions in these posts.  I hope that you are learning as much as I am! 

So....since it's time to start the mini critiques again... the only fair way that I can see is... the first two who comment will be using the "hotseat".  Hmmmm I'm going to make it easy on myself here... the next two will get the next critique's spot, and the next two the following critique spot. 

It is summertime so I'm going to say that each set of critiques will be up for 10 days to two weeks.  I know that this slows down the critiques but it's Summer and so many people back off their computer use and I want the volunteers to get as many comments as possible.  When Summer ends I will pick up the pace again.

Ready?    Set?     GO!!!