tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6678382225530134350.post6411137654258345072..comments2023-11-02T09:54:39.213-05:00Comments on Aunt Karen's Creations: It's time for another critique!Aunt Karen's Creationshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10728071149508566771noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6678382225530134350.post-82336250260801478912010-09-21T14:28:57.294-05:002010-09-21T14:28:57.294-05:00thanks everyone for the great advice, I will updat...thanks everyone for the great advice, I will update my item soon :)Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03116728916636797483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6678382225530134350.post-59931581214172812852010-09-21T09:20:04.661-05:002010-09-21T09:20:04.661-05:00Well there is not much I can say because everyone ...Well there is not much I can say because everyone else said it for me I cant wait to see the changes. :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06772897158872183681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6678382225530134350.post-63224069708080082152010-09-17T09:17:17.394-05:002010-09-17T09:17:17.394-05:00Such great help! Thank each one of you. I've...Such great help! Thank each one of you. I've made the changes in the description and you are all right, it does make the purse/bag more appealing. As for the pictures - next week I will actually have a model! Yaaay! You can bet that I will write down your comments and be sure that each helpful suggestion is done!<br /><br />Thank you for your help you are all just super!!!Aunt Karen's Creationshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10728071149508566771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6678382225530134350.post-9598198485849412482010-09-08T16:40:00.959-05:002010-09-08T16:40:00.959-05:00Giggles,
A picture to show scale would be helpful...Giggles, <br />A picture to show scale would be helpful, the item pinned onto a shirt or coat or pinned to one of your scarves? But you would like help with tags, titles, etc. I do love that you have repeated the title in the first line of the item description. If the buyer scrolls the page a little he/she will see the title repeated. As for tags, you don't need to repeat tiny as a tag Ritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07323608363545170388noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6678382225530134350.post-87121465105790048402010-09-08T15:08:01.108-05:002010-09-08T15:08:01.108-05:00Karen, I love the paisley pattern of your purse! ...Karen, I love the paisley pattern of your purse! Agree seeing it in action might be effective, against white maybe a bit stark. Do you need to say bedsheet? What about simply cotton/polyester? Wouldn't bother me even if it was a used sheet but since you explained "never opened" sounds like you're defending it.<br /><br />Absolutely loving your paperboy hats, Karen!<br /><PatsyOxhttp://www.oxoriginalartjewelry.etsy.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6678382225530134350.post-68263839265553518062010-09-07T20:36:05.746-05:002010-09-07T20:36:05.746-05:00Giggles, I'd love to see you make your first p...Giggles, I'd love to see you make your first picture of this cute brooch on a jacket lapel or on that black top your model is wearing in your other shop photos. Showing it worn would really highlight its scale.<br /><br />Repeating the title in the first line of your description may not be making the most of the SEO potential. Adding metric measurements is always a good idea to inform those jswriteshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01343283370307559246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6678382225530134350.post-72374203301273454072010-09-06T17:23:56.575-05:002010-09-06T17:23:56.575-05:00Hi Karen!
First, I think your listing is pretty ...Hi Karen! <br /><br />First, I think your listing is pretty good. The description is informative and personal. And the pictures show the aspects of the purse. Maybe you could do some action type shots? Show someone out an about on their daily ventures pulling something out of it. Or take a picture of the inside with a checkbook, phone, water bottle, etc. in the purse to help give perspective of Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com